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here is a pirate fan-fic!

My name is Laylel. I am a pirate. I seek the truth of my past. But I will tell you how this all happened. Ehem.


 
It was all in a stormy night. My rich family and I were on a royal ship. We where having a toast when pirates broke on to our ship. I heard my father whispering hide the haze cutlass. The pirates bursted in the room. They killed everyone. Except my oldest brother, my littlest sister, and me. We where taken prisoners. They but us in cells and put chains on our legs. What do we do? Well the chains werent small enough for my little sister. She slipped right through them like butter in the door jam. The keys where arm length for my sister. She got the keys and freed us. We ran to the deck and we sneaked pass the guards. But the fat guard blocking the escape boat saw us. I told my brother and sister to leave me behind. They did. I was in relief that they got away safely, but I didnt. The guard grabbed my and took me to the captain. He was Captain Inkeye.   

haze cutlass:
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That's cool. And I realized that all of these fan-fics (including mine) have the parents k illed in them. Oh well, I wanna read the next one. Has anybody read mine?

-- Edited by Batclaw at 13:13, 2008-04-27

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Yeah, the parents are all killed. Weird. Well, actually, not in Bubbleshine's story. I read yours, though.

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 20:48, 2008-04-28

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I know you did Pantherstar, and Secretpaw too. I'm just wondering if anyone else has

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"Well, well, well looky what we have here." Inkeye said

"Let me go!" I said

Ok boys let her go. In the sea! But before that but her in the cells.

They took me to a cell. There I thought I was done for. But I saw a shiny thing. It was the Haze cutlass! I took it up. There it was. It had a dagger sheath with it. I put it in. It didnt go through the sheath! The guard took me to the plank.

"Any last words?"

"Yea, have at you!" I pulled out the sword and began to fight. I won and took hold of the ship. There on the escape boat was a letter. It said:

Dear Laylel,

We have swam to lost cove. We hope you come for us.

 

Sincerely your brother and sister,

 

Merry and Meck.



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wheeee!

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Wheee! what?

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just WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

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Oh. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!

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I LOVE THIS STORY! GOOD JOB IRISPAW!

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