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here are the positions.  The number in parentacese shows the amount of that position allowed. limit:10 people. Try not to take an important part in every RP. There has to be at least one apprentice and warrior.

leader: open (1)

Deputy: open (1)

Medicine cats: Twilightpool, Iriseye (taken)

Warriors: Pantherheart

Apprentices: Batpaw, hollypaw

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 05:11, 2008-03-12

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 22:43, 2008-03-12

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 03:43, 2008-03-14

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 02:21, 2008-03-20

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 03:11, 2008-03-20

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 18:59, 2008-03-20

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Uh, well I'm an apprentice so.........

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ooc: I'll be an apprentice too.

bic: Hollypaw padded out of camp. The fresh-kill pile wasn't seeming too fresh... She heard rustling and stalked towards the noise. She pounced on the creature and killed it with a swift bite. She scraped dirt over the mouse and continued something.

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ooc: i'll be a warrior now so there won't be a clan of apprentices.

ic: Pantherheart was hunting when he scented a rabbit. he moved downwind so he could approach without it scenting him. He burst out, and caught it before it could run away. He brought it to camp, and caught a few mice and a squirrel on the way back. "that should do for a while" and returned to camp.

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Batpaw was sleeping all day when he smelled food. He ran to find what it was and saw Pantherstar eating mice and a squirrel. Batpaw lunged for the meat.

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occ: my name in this is PantherHEART, that was my warrior name. the end 'star' shows you're leader.

IC: "hey batpaw! I saved you some fresh-kill!" he called to Batpaw, and passed him a few mice.

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 22:29, 2008-03-15

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"Fanks" he muttered as he hungrily ate. "I vas starfing" he said with a mouthful.

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"you're welcome." he finished, and started grooming himself. he scented something straange... fox!!!


-- Edited by Pantherstar at 22:28, 2008-03-15

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"Just like old times ay buddy?" I said. (See Batpaw's Story Part 2 for details)

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ooc: Just to let you guys know, you talk in "Third Person".

bic: Hollypaw brought her fresh-kill back to camp and dropped it on the pile. She grabbed a plump mouse and padded over to Batpaw and Pantherheart.
   "So how's the prey running?" She asked them.

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"It's running fine... and soon we'll have a few foxes too." he said, and then two ginger faces appeared out of the bracken. "CHARGE!!!!!" he shouted, and attacked the nearest one.

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I want to join can i be med cat

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OOC: Sure, I'll put it up.do you want to be twilightpool, or Oatpool, or a different name?

-- Edited by Pantherstar at 00:30, 2008-03-20

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Twilightpool

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OOC:kk i'll put that up now.

IC: Pantherheart attacked the foxes, and he took one down easily. "Yeah, don't worry about me, no problem here, it's just one on about four full-grown foxes, and I can scent more!" he shouted with sarcasm in his voice.

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OOC: can i be med cat Iriseye

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OOC: sure, there's two med. cat spots.

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Iriseye padded out of the med cat den "what a beautiful day to hunt!" she mewed

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Pantherstar called out to Iriseye, "Watch out! There are foxes out! We drove most out, but there might be more around."

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twilightpool was over by the nursery fighting off a fox then another came up beside him there was no wy she could take on both of them "Batpaw help me!ple"she broke off as a fox hit her in the side of the head.She smashed into a rock and was uncosiouse.the big fox ran off towards Iriseye while the small one was dragging her off towards the camp entrance.

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"OMG!!!!! TWILIGHTPOOL!!!!!" I ran over to Twilightpool as the others were fighting. I didn't realize a hand sticking up from the ground. It grabbed me and started pulling me down. "AUGH, BADGERS!!!!"

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"That's it... YAAH!!!!!!!!!!!" Pantherstar was angry, and took out the fox taking Twilightpool. Then he attacked the hand dragging Batpaw under and pulled him up.

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"*Pant pant* thanks" Batpaw gasped. "I think that's the last of 'em. He began walking back to camp when he suddenly collapsed. He had suffered from too many injuries and would soon die if not taken care of.

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"Batpaw!!!! Twilightpool! Iriseye! Come quick!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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*Struggles to breathe*

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"help!!!"

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*Gasp, loses consiousness*

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Twilightpool waits till someone notices that she is dieing of head trama

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*Clings hand to heart, wheezes* He is also suffering from heart desease, just like Goku.

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OOC:wtf I'm dieing



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Your dieing??!? But I am!!!

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b ut you are wat

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I'm dieing!

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OOC: okay, this has gotten off topic.

IC: "No... my clan... everyone is dieing... all because of me." Pantherstar said.

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*Gasps* He needs a medicine cat soon or he will die.

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Twilightpool woke up and saw a stary pelt hovered over her."S-S-Summerpelt is that you?I've missed you so much my love."she said licking him all over."There is no time for that now you have to go save your clan."he said sternly."I no but i miss you so much wat do i do?"she said determined."You must take Here I'm going to give you a life but you must save your clan."He looked her in the eyes.Back in the camp Twilightpool's pelt started to glow then she took a deep breath and opened her eyes she was back.She rushed over to Pantherstar."It's ok I'm going to save you I wont let you die."she ran to her den and she felt a pelt brush against hers and it was Summerpelt."Summerpelt take this she" handed him some fowl smelling leaves."Give these to Pantherheart.We can't let him die I'll never forgive myself if I let him die."she said remembering that rainy night when Summerpelt lie dying."Go quickly."he turned with out another word and ran into the clearing he did as directed and he got Pantherheart into the med cat's den where he could lie down.She gave Batpaw herbs and took him back to the med cats den.She layed down and Summerpelt padded over to Twilightpool and layed down beside her."You know that it wasn't your fault that I went to join starclan It was just my turn."he said looking into her eyes.Twilightpool looked away."I could of saved you I could have saved you"her voice faulted and she started sobbing."I love you and I always will.Nothing you could ever do would change that.I thought you knew that."he said."I know but its all my fault that you aren't here with me every day."she said through the tears."Twilightpool It was not your fault I got Greencough."he said."I'm sorry for talking like that I'm just so stressed."she said."Thats okay.Remember I love you."he said then disappeared all that was left was his scent.

OOC:If you don't lik tell me i just couldn't let my clan die and can I have another cat join Arrowflight? he can be anything except an elder and he was a rouge but joined the clan.

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Um, that's nice but I'M DIEING!!! NOT PANTHERSTAR!!!!!

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OOC:I already helped you i just needed to save Pantherheart you fine

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Uh, would you mind telling me WHEN THAT HAPPENED???!!!

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After i saved Pantherheart.


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Oh. Back to RPing.

I was no longer dieing, but I had not waken up. I was haunted, by a dream.
In this dream, I was walking through a dark forrest, my stomach growling. Then I saw a mouse. I got on my haunches and leaped, k illing it with one strike. "The clan" I thought. "I must hunt for my clan first" I realized the camp was miles away, and I could barely stand due to hunger. "They won't mind if I eat one little mouse" so I ate it. 2 seconds later I heard a loud voice. "BATPAW!!! WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!" "That voice!!! Pantherheart!!!"
He appeared to me, only he was bigger, more courageous, and infuriated. He was a leader. "THE CLAN COMES FIRST!!! YOU HAVE DISOBEYED THE GREATEST LAW!!!"
"Pantherhe...star, I..I would die before I even got to camp if I didn't.."
"SILENCE!!!!" he roared. "YOU HAVE BROKEN A LAW, YOU MUST BE PUNISHED!!!!!"
"No!!! Please!!!" but Pantherstar leapt at me, teeth bared, claws unsheathed. I screamed.

Just then Twilightpool noticed Batpaw screaming, clinging to his heart, sweating, shaking, still unconsious. He hadn't been cured. The herbs given to him had made it worse!

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OOC:What ever are you saying you could do it better I hate yous (lol just kidding i dont hate you or any body else on here)

I Got To Go Catch The Bus bye

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Uh, I don't get it.

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OOC:I had to leave so now i will finish the post

Twilightpool noticed that batpaw had broken out in a cold sweat.He must have had an allergic reaction to the burdock root she thought to herself.She woke him up and gave him so water and some poppy seeds to make him sleep.Now then he should sleep the WHOLE night without dreams.(no more allergic reactions lol)

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*Breath, breath, bre....* Xl

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OOC: Did you just die or die yo go 2 sleep

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Starclan has gained another warrior.

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Twilightpool went over to batpaw(right).she layed down and wept."no not again I'm a complete loser I cant do anything right I couldn't even save Batpaw(right)"she said her voice crakey.Summerpelt came up beside her and Licked Batpaws head respectfully."Batpaw are you ready?"he saked His voice was full of pride.He looked over at Twilightpol and mouthed the words I love yo and then waited for Batpaw to say his good byes.

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"Yes I'm ready." Batpaw's spirit arose from the body. "Thank you Twilightpool, for everything. Say goodbye to everyone for me." And then with a nod he followed Summerpelt to Starclan.

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"No... my best friend... gone... NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Pantherstar ran out of the camp suddenly, with droplets of water flying behind him, landing on the ground.

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